Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Descriptive Writing - Kate By Orla.

KATE


Kate is a great teacher.  She is good at setting high standards for the team.  She is fun but focused. Her class is so lucky to have her as their techer. She smells like lollies and perfume. She feels like silk. She sounds serious but nice. She has long brown hair, blue eyes and she is quite tall. Kate loves to be at this school. Hope she stays another year.

By Orla.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Orla,

    Wow what a lovely description of me! I was really happy to read this wonderful writing and I even shared it with my husband Michael. I like how you used all the senses in your description.

    Keep up the great work!
    From Kate

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