Goldilocks & The 3 Sharks By Ryder
Once upon a time in the deep, dark ocean lived a naughty girl named Goldilocks. Goldilocks went for a swim and got lost in the ocean.
In an old ship wreck lived 3 vegetarian sharks making seaweed salad and they tasted it. But it was too hot so they went for a swim for it to cool down.
Along came greedy Goldilocks and she felt like robbing so SMASH, BAM, BANG!
Goldilocks broke in. Goldilocks hurricanes around the ship wreck breaking chairs and gobbling seaweed salad.
She was tired from all the hurricaning so she fell asleep on Baby Sharks bed.
DING, DING goes the clock. The 3 Sharks come back and discovered that someone had broken into their ship wreck. They had eaten all the seaweed salad and hurricaned to their bedroom.
The 3 Sharks discovered Goldilocks in there bedroom so they scared her away.
Fantastic story Ryder. I love the words "hurricaned" and "hurricaning", they describe the devastation Goldilocks causing beautifully. Thanks for sharing.
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ReplyDeleteI like the new version of Goldilocks and the three bears that you did its great
Hi Ryder
ReplyDeleteI loved that story.
Did you write it all by your self?
It sounds like Goldilocks is very greedy.