Monday, July 8, 2013

Goldilocks & the 3 Aliens By Kayne.

Once upon a time in space lived a naughty astronaut called Goldilocks.  Goldilocks never listened to her mother and left her space rocket and got lost in the solar system. 

In the solar system, on a moon lived 3 Aliens.  They made gooew but it was too hot like a volcano erupting so they went for a float.  

Goldilocks went crunch and munch and ate up all the gooew.  Next Goldilocks destroyed the 3 Aliens space chair.  She was so tired she fell asleep in baby aliens bed.  

The 3 Aliens were unhappy so they woke Goldilocks up and she got scared and floated away to her rocket.

1 comment:

  1. Jacqui (Jaimes Mum)July 10, 2013 at 4:16 PM

    I very much enjoyed your story of Goldilocks and the three Aliens Kayne. "Destroyed" is such a grrrrreat word, excellent choice. "Obliterated", is another fun word and can be used instead of "destroyed". Ka pai to mahi.

    ReplyDelete