Thursday, July 4, 2013

Goldilocks & The 3 Sharks. An Innovated Narrative By Maia.

Goldilocks & The 3 Sharks.  An Innovated Narrative By Maia.











Once upon a time in the deep, blue ocean lived a nasty mermaid called Goldilocks.  Goldilocks swam and got lost.

In an old ship wreck lived 3 vegetarian Sharks.  The 3 Sharks were cooking seaweed salad but the seaweed was too hot.  So the 3 Sharks let it cool down till 1'o'clock.

Goldilocks found an old shipwreck and felt like robbing so SMASH, BANG, CRASH! 
Goldilocks broke into the shipwreck then gobbled up the seaweed salad.

Next she sat on Baby Sharks chair and broke it like a car accident.  

After all her smashing she fell asleep in Baby Sharks comfortable bed.  The clock stroke 1 and the sharks came back from their long swim.

They were furious at Goldilocks like a volcano erupting.  The 3 Sharks roared at Goldilocks.  Goldilocks was terrified and she zoomed like a flashing bright rocket in space.

1 comment:

  1. Jacqui (Jaimes Mum)July 6, 2013 at 4:59 PM

    Fabulous narrative Maia. I love the words "like a car accident" what a wonderful way to describe what naughty Goldilocks has been up to. Lovely mahi (thats 'work' in te reo Maori) Maia.

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