Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Little Red Astronaut ... re-told by Kaia .



Once upon a time in a floating, huge Space Station located in the Red Galaxy there lived a girl named Little Red Astronaut. She always wore a red cape made by Grandma Milky Way, over her space suit.  Her nickname which everyone called her was Little Red Astronaut.She was as uncarful as a deer and curious.

Blonk! Dong! Ding!

The holographic projecter was turning on.  Mum and Little Red Astronaut came running to see who it was.  It was Grandma Milky Way!? She was very sick and wanted some cakes and see Little Red Astronaut.Mum said she could go with a basket of cakes and through the astroid belt.She wanted to make sure that Little Red Astronaut was safe so she warned her not to talk to cunning aliens who lived in the astroid belt.

Little Red Astronaut zipped out of the swirling Space Station with a flaming jet pack on her back and a basket of cakes in her hand.Ahead of her was the lonely,dark astroid belt.Little Red Astronaut was so excited since it was her first time going alone through the astroid belt.She zoomed past giant astriods until her jetpack ran out of fuel,she had to fix it herself.The Big Bad Alein came lurking out between a big crater.He asked her where she was going with the cakes.She told him she was taking the food to Grandma Milky Way on the dusty moon.He told her quickly that he must go somewhere and was late.She belived him ?!

 Little did Red know that Professer Rock was taking poisonous rock samples nearby.He was watching their every movement.Professer knew the Alien well.Professer Rock knew that the Alien could get into horrible mischef so he followed Big Bad Alien.Little Red Astronaut had fixed her jet pack. She wasn't as fast as the Alien because it wasn't fixed correctly. The Alien arrived at the lonley moon.He saw Grandma Milky Way's lab.He chuckled to himself. This would be this best day of his life.Professer Rock hid behind a big crater and watched the Alien carefully. The Big Bad Alien banged on the door. The lab shook.A croaky voice allowed him to come in.He pushed the door open. Grandma screamed.
She jumped out of the folding bed like a kangaroo. They ran round and round the lab banging into things,till the Alien cornered Grandma. Before she could run away he ate her greedliy. This was certanly turning out to be the best day of his life. Little Red Astronaut arrived finally.


She didn't know that the Alien was wearing Grandma's lab coat and lying in bed.He told her to come inside. She opened the door and walked towards the bed slowly.''Grandma you have tentacals ''said Red.''Better to feel you dear ''reply's the Alien. She walks closer.''What big eyes you have''she said.''All the better to see you come closer''said the Alien. Red came closer.''Oh what big nose you have''she said.''Better to smell you''he said.''What big teeth you have''says Red.''To eat you!''yells Big Alien.He jumped out of the bed. Little Red is chased round the lab screaming. Professer Rock hiding outside hears the comotion.He runs inside still holding the jug containing poisonous rock samples. He pours it down the Aliens throat. The Alien falls to the floor and dies. Professer cuts open the stomach and out  comes Grandma. They share the cakes. The end.


















                                                          

1 comment:

  1. awesome Onomatopoeia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



    From Maya

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