Sunday, October 19, 2014

Quick Write: Adding Adjectives.

The fierce and scaly crocodile is grinning to himself.  He has his razor sharp teeth ready to chomp up meat.  The cold blooded crocodile is lying on the muddy earth relaxing.
The hungry crocodile is waiting for yummy meat.  he has ever so rough skin.
By George.

The dangerous crocodile is grinning dreadfully to himself.  The deadly crocodile is resting on the hot, dry sand.  The ghastly crocodile has teeth sharper than knives.
By Pace.

The mad crocodiles teeth are razor sharp.  The ferocious crocodile is smiling.  The warm crocodile is sun bathing in the daylight sun.
By Finn. 

2 comments:

  1. Love your work George! Such descriptive writing!

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  2. Wow Room 3! Those adjectives make your writing so descriptive and interesting. I can't wait to read more.
    Nikki

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