When I was a fish By Annabel
When I was little fish i played on the coral and seaweed First I went out of my hole and went to a sunken boat. Then I saw a group of sharks. Next I went to the fish and they teased me. But I scared them and felt tired. I went home and had same seaweed and pesto. The next day I went to my aunties to get a rest. I felt happy.
Hi Annabel, I liked reading your story. I liked the way you described what you did. Well done.
ReplyDeleteSandie
Welcome Annabel :)
ReplyDeleteTalofa Annabel, great work with your fish picture. I like the patch work you created for the scales and excellent use of background paint for the sea and sand. Sea weed and pesto sounds healthy. Keep up the good work. Otalani
ReplyDeleteWhat a fabulous fish Annabel! How did you make your picture? From Room 15
ReplyDeleteHi Annabel,
ReplyDeleteGreat writing. I think your writing is very descriptive. I am in your brother's class you saw me twice in the library. Keep up the good work.
From Minh Anh