Thursday, May 16, 2013

Funky Feet Day Poems

Room 7 has been learning about Poetry.  Today we tried writing noun/adjective poems.


Jasmin
Shoes, shoes, shoes.
Glamorous shoes.
Fantastic, glamorous shoes.
I hop, I jump in my shoes.
Glorious shoes.

Tai
Shoes, shoes, shoes.
Glorious shoes.
Astonishing, glorious shoes.
I move, move to the radical groove.
Furious shoes.

Koen
Feet, feet, feet.
Amazing feet.
Gorgeous, amazing feet.
I moved on my funky feet.
Radical feet.

Kate
Feet, feet, feet.
Fantastic feet.
Glamorous, fantastic feet.
I moved on my fantastic feet like a fancy butterfly.
Glorious feet.

Lewcius
Shoes, shoes, shoes.
Amazing shoes.
Gorgeous, amazing shoes.
I moved like roller skates.
Dancing shoes.

Siena
Shoes, shoes, shoes.
Glamorous shoes.
Gorgeous, glamorous shoes.
I danced, I hopped.
Fantastic shoes.

Maia
Shoes, shoes, shoes.
Fantastic shoes.
Glamtastic, fantastic shoes.
I move, move to the groove in my shoes.
Gorgeous shoes.

Sasha
Shoes, shoes, shoes.
Shimmering shoes.
Glamtastic, shimmering shoes.
I dazzle in my dancing shoes.
Ferocious shoes.

Rita
Feet, feet, feet.
Fantastic feet.
Glamorous, fantastic feet.
I hopped and dropped in my fabulous shoes.
Amazing feet. 
Jaime
Shoes, shoes, shoes.
Glamorous shoes.
Glorious, glamorous shoes.
I danced and I shuffled in my astonishing shoes.
Amazing shoes.
Kayne
Feet, feet, feet.
Fantastic feet.
Glorious, fantastic feet.
I walk on my monster feet.
Radical feet.

Ryder
Shoes, shoes, shoes.
Glamorous shoes.
Fantastic, glamorous shoes.
I danced in my radical shoes at Funky feet parade.
Bonkers shoes.

Zephyr
Feet, feet, feet.
Glamorous feet.
Radical, glamorous feet.
I move very slow on my radical feet.
Ferocious feet.

Immy
Shoes, shoes, shoes.
Shimmer shoes.
Shimmer, glamtastic shoes.
I danced like a gorgeous diamond.
Fantastic feet.

Micheal
Shoes, shoes, shoes.
Fantastic shoes.
Glorious, fantastic shoes.
I moved like a gummy bear.
Groovy shoes.

Finn
Feet, feet, feet.
Glorious feet.
Fantastic, glorious feet.
I moved like a rattle snake in my shoes.
Slivery shoes.

Eli
Feet, feet, feet.
Fantastic feet.
Shimmering, fantastic feet.
Stepping step by step.
Amazing feet.

1 comment:

  1. those funky feet were rad and fabulous you put so much work into them! they were wonderful .room15

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