Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Easter By Jaime

BUMP! THUMP! BUMP!

In the morning I ran outside... HUNT, HUNT, HUNT.

I went hunting for the glorious Easter eggs.

My surprised eyes went ... BOING! BOING! BOING!

My hungry mouth went ... GOBBLE! GOBBLE! GOBBLE! once I got my easter eggs.

I got two fabulous Easter eggs.  

I felt sparkly like a disco ball.

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  1. Melville Intermediate, HamiltonApril 3, 2013 at 2:57 PM

    Jamie we shared your writing with our class of Y7 and Y8 students here in Hamilton by putting it on the data projector for them to see. Our teacher liked the gobble gobble line as we thought that it would make you sound happy eating the Easter Eggs.
    Mr Webb and Room Five, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waiakto, melvilleroom8.blogspot.com

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    1. Jaime WatsonApril 4, 2013 at 12:05 PM

      Thanks Melville Intermediate. I hope you had a fantastic
      Easter!

      from Jaime

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  2. Jacqui Watson (Jaimes mum)April 3, 2013 at 8:30 PM

    BUMP THUMP BUMP! Excellent first words to a fabulous story JJ, I just knew I was in for a thrilling read. 'BOING BOING BOING' I can imagine your eyes bouncing from hiding place to hiding place looking for cheeky wee eggs - peek-a-boo!

    What a fantastic recount Jaime! And I see Mr Webb and Room Five, Melville Intermediate are fans too, how wonderful they share their thoughts with you, what a compliment!

    Ka pai to mahi!

    From Mum

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  3. Year 3/4 Grey Lynn ScribblersApril 3, 2013 at 10:10 PM

    My eyes were drawn to your blog entry. What a GRABBER! That's what I call a sensational story starter.
    I can just imagine your Easter morning perfectly, as you described it so well.
    I am super impressed.

    Ka Pai Jaime!

    Andrea

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    1. AnonymousApril 4, 2013 at 3:57 PM

      Hi Andrea,

      Thank you Andrea for looking at my blog.

      From Jaime

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