Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Monster Force By Matelita

Monster   force.        



 my  Monster  is  FROM   PLANET   FIRE,   HE CAME  TO  GREY  LYNN FOR  A  USELESS  KING    SO  HE  DESTROYED  HIM.   HE  WAS  THE   SCARY  MONSTER.   HE HAS  BIG   HANDS    THAT  SHOT  POWERFUL  FIRE  AND FIVE  DARK  EYES  AND   SHARP  SCRACHIHG  TEETH  AND   VERY  HAIRY  AND  SLIMY  GOO AND TWO   BIG FEET  . HE  FEELS  THAT   HE   SHOULD  BE  A  MASSIVE   MONSTER  TRACKER    BECAUSE   HE   CAN  BEAT  ANYONE  ANYTIME.  HE SMELLS  LIKE  A  STINKY  SOCK   .  HE  SOUNDS  LIKE   A  GROWLING  TIGER,  HE  TASTE  LIKE  RED  MEAT  .  SOMETIMES    YOU  SEE  HI M  .  SAME  TO  ,    HE  SHOULD    BE  SHIFTED    AWAY  .

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  1. Hi Matelita,

    Your monster sounds scary and powerful ! You know what? I thought I smelt him the other day outside our classroom, but it ended up really being a stinky, old sock. Or was it?

    Keep writing ! Your descriptive words you chose were very vivid and I could imagine your monster in my head !
    I hope he doesn't look like the two monsters in your picture ! (and I don't mean you ! ) hee hee !
    Great story !

    Andrea

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