The dark grey clouds loomed over head. Rain poured down like tiny fish. The lightning shoot down like a golden arrow. As the rain poured down lots of tiny sparks flooded out of the lightning. The thunder BOOMED like a BIG, BIG dog from the sky. I wonder what it would be like to be in a storm like that!
I really enjoyed your descriptive language in your story. It was a very creative snapshot of what it might be like to be caught in a storm! Keep it up!
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Another beautiful story from you Charlotte. I especially love the simile "rain poured down like tiny fish" - wonderful stuff! More please.
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