Quick Write: Adding Adjectives.

The fierce and scaly crocodile is grinning to himself.  He has his razor sharp teeth ready to chomp up meat.  The cold blooded crocodile is lying on the muddy earth relaxing.

The hungry crocodile is waiting for yummy meat.  he has ever so rough skin.

By George.

The dangerous crocodile is grinning dreadfully to himself.  The deadly crocodile is resting on the hot, dry sand.  The ghastly crocodile has teeth sharper than knives.

By Pace.

The mad crocodiles teeth are razor sharp.  The ferocious crocodile is smiling.  The warm crocodile is sun bathing in the daylight sun.

By Finn. 

Pet sitting Max

Pet sitting Max

Equipment needed

Kitten food

Water

Toy's 

Brush

Water from the laundry

Instructions

1. Feed the kitten three time's a day

2. Clean the bowl once a week.

3. Brush the kitten once a week.

4. Let the kitten go outside to go to the toilet.

5.Play with him and cuddle him.

By Lily

A Moment in Time by Enzo

When I was at the beach I saw a sand at the other side of the beach.I heard some annoying sea gulls that had white feathers and orange beaks. I wondered if I could get to the other side, it could of took ages but we did it anyway.

Power Surge By Enzo.

A sparkly line of lights going up the trunk of the power surge.

On the power surge it would be very noisy like a group of stomping elepants.

The power surge gores round and round like a spinning top.

Beach By Flynn

I smelt... smelly salt.

I felt... tickily sand.

I heard... squawking seagulls.

I saw... crashing waves.

I tasted... salty air.

I felt inside... I didn't want to be there.

 

Writing to instruct By Room 3.

We are learning how to write to instuct.

Today we talked about leaving instructions for a pet-sitter.

Here is what we thought of...

 Next we talked about organisers.  Bryan showed us how we can take notes and write down our ideas in order.

 Tomorrow we are going to turn our ideas into a piece of instructional writing for our pet sitter.

Until then here is a video clip of our fabulous pets... ENJOY!!!

Power Surge By Will

Power Surge 

I saw a huge seat carrying me.  In front of it everything was blurred.

I was tasting enjoyable air streaming through my lips.

I heard people being sick and screaming extremely loud.

I smelt disgusting vomit racing out of peoples mouths.

I was panicking loud, very loud... as loud as a hurricane.

I felt wind sweeping across my face trying to push me off.

Describe It - Quick Write.

Power Surge By Lily

I can see the spinning, terrifying ride go round and round like a hurricane.

I can taste my disgusting vomit about to explode out of my mouth!!!!!!!

I hear all of the scared peoples normal smells mixed together which smells disgusting.

The freaked out people were kicking their legs and scrambling their arms around like they're scared as can be.

I can feel the straps pushing against my waist really hard.

I was yelling, screaming and shouting as hard as heavy bricks being dropped on my head.

I thought I was going to vomit.

I felt dizzy and great when I got off!

Power Surge By Ana

When I was at Rainbows End I went on a scary ride. I was way up in the sky and I saw the clouds joining together.

I tasted the vomit coming up from my stomach.

I heard the wind blowing into my ear like a hurricane.  People screaming as loud as they could.

I smelt the candy way down below me.

My arms and legs were shaking so fast that my legs could of fell off.

I felt the wind smashing on my head and face like a slap.

I was saying in my head... "STOP, PLEASE STOP, STOP PLEASE"!!!

I wondered what the people were saying in their head.

My heart was skipping really fast.