Wednesday, August 7, 2013

The Amazing Dinosaur Dance By Maia

Today for reading my group had to re-wrtie the Poem of The Week.

SMASH,BANG,CRASH...

goes the thunder. 

BANG, CRACK, SHIVER

goes the big dinosaurs feet.

dance around,
dance around,
dance, dance, dance around.
The Dinosaurs roar so loud...
the ground cracks.

BY MAIA. 
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3 comments:

  1. From BriarnAugust 15, 2013 at 2:33 PM

    Hi Maia
    Sounds like a really cool dance poem.
    I really liked how you put Smash,Bang,Crash,Bang,Crack,Shiver in capital letters.
    What was your favorite part of the poem?
    Thanks for posting.Hope you post some more.

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  2. Room 14 Seekers of KnowledgeAugust 15, 2013 at 2:40 PM

    Hi Maia,

    I think you did a really good job at writing a poem

    I think you describe your poem really well how did you come up with it

    Why did you chose The amazing dinosaur dance?

    Thanks for sharing your poem from Kalia room 13

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  3. Room 14 Seekers of KnowledgeAugust 15, 2013 at 3:08 PM

    Hi Maia

    cool poem dance i liked how you explaned it i would
    like to try that stomp dance
    i have stomp on my feet before
    have you done it before?
    ifound it really cool becuase it looks fun

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