Thursday, August 1, 2013

Simple Delicious By Kayne

Sniff, sniff, sniff...

Last night I went to yummy KFC with Mum and my brother. 
First I ate my pop corn chicken. I felt fantastic. 
NEXT I ate my chips . I felt glamtastic.
Finally I went  home. 
I felt merry because I ate all my dinner.
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  1. Year 3/4 Grey Lynn ScribblersAugust 2, 2013 at 8:09 PM

    Hi Kayne,

    Your poem made me feel hungry! I like how you used time words in the correct order. They made our poem flow smoothly.

    Keep it up !

    Andrea

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