Wednesday, October 15, 2014

A Moment in Time by Enzo

When I was at the beach I saw a sand at the other side of the beach.I heard some annoying sea gulls that had white feathers and orange beaks. I wondered if I could get to the other side, it could of took ages but we did it anyway.

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  1. Hi Enzo,
    your moment in time was awesome.
    We really liked the way you disribed the sea gulls and the beach.
    Well done,
    keep up the good work.
    Naomi and Maya
    Room 11
    your buddy class

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    1. Sorry we meant discribed not disribed

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