Today Room 3 used story starters to do some creative writing.
We focused on using WOW words to create a picture in the readers head.
Tell us what you think of our stories below....
The Green Hen By Bryan
Once there lived an amazing green hen.
This was not an ordinary green hen.... for this hen was a terrific green colour. It had shiny feathers.
The green hen by Zoe
Once upon a time there lived a little a hen named Annabel . She had shiny green feathers that lite up in the sun . Annabel had the most beautiful and small come of all
that is what made her beautiful . She had the most ordinary come of all it was the shiniest green in the universe. All the other rosters fall in love with Annabel. Annabel can ran as fast as a cheater every three haws .
The green hen by Lucy
Once upon a time there lived a not a normal hen at all.The hen was bright, bright, bright green.
The hen's eyes are Sparkly like a diamond. Who owns the green hen.
The hen's comb is so,so,so green.
The green Hen By Lola
Once there lived a colourful hen that
was green. She ate tasty broccoli from the garden. some hens think she
is very weird and ugly but she thinks she is fabulous!!!! sometimes when it is steaming hot his green smooth feathers are very shiny in the sun light (The hen are archly jellies and they try not to look.) After he felt very amazing and terrific!!!!!!
The End !!!!
The green hen. By Ana.
Once there lived a hen .The hen was shiny as shooting star.The hens beck was as smooth as a baby's bottom.His eyes where as green as a Merill what was amazing.The
hen cold not fly but he was as fast as a cheater.The hens comb was like a red diamond
twirling in the air.The feathers where very shiny.
This was not an ordinary green hen.... for this hen was a terrific green colour. It had shiny feathers.
The green hen by Zoe
Once upon a time there lived a little a hen named Annabel . She had shiny green feathers that lite up in the sun . Annabel had the most beautiful and small come of all
that is what made her beautiful . She had the most ordinary come of all it was the shiniest green in the universe. All the other rosters fall in love with Annabel. Annabel can ran as fast as a cheater every three haws .
The green hen by Lucy
Once upon a time there lived a not a normal hen at all.The hen was bright, bright, bright green.
The hen's eyes are Sparkly like a diamond. Who owns the green hen.
The hen's comb is so,so,so green.
The green Hen By Lola
Once there lived a colourful hen that
was green. She ate tasty broccoli from the garden. some hens think she
is very weird and ugly but she thinks she is fabulous!!!! sometimes when it is steaming hot his green smooth feathers are very shiny in the sun light (The hen are archly jellies and they try not to look.) After he felt very amazing and terrific!!!!!!
The End !!!!
The green hen. By Ana.
Once there lived a hen .The hen was shiny as shooting star.The hens beck was as smooth as a baby's bottom.His eyes where as green as a Merill what was amazing.The
hen cold not fly but he was as fast as a cheater.The hens comb was like a red diamond
twirling in the air.The feathers where very shiny.
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