Wednesday, June 18, 2014

Independent Writing By Lily

Once there lived a very sad dolphin.  He was sad because some nasty people caught him when he was living happily in the wavy sea.  Now he was living in a little pond that was really boring.  The dolphin was expecting to see that nasty people because he was a big and strong dolphin now.

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  1. Hi Lily, I hope the large dolphin somehow gets back to the ocean so that he has plenty of room to swim around in. There is a cool book called "Dear Greenpeace" which is a little like your story. You might find it in the library, keep up the great writing.
    Kerry R10

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