Tuesday, March 11, 2014

When I was scared By Grace

When I was scared at butterfly creek.

At butterflycreek I went into a room.
First I saw a big, big spider and I was afraid.
Next I saw more real alive spiders.
After the spiders I went to see the beetles.  There were 100's of them!
Finally we saw the cockroaches and then we got lunch.
I felt happy because we had a good time in the end.
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  1. UnknownMarch 12, 2014 at 4:14 PM

    Hi Grace,
    Butterfly Creek is such an interesting place. I thought it was very clever how you used time connectives like first, next, after and finally to show us the sequence of events during your visit to Butterfly Creek.
    From
    Courtney and Room 11

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  2. AnonymousMarch 17, 2014 at 1:00 AM

    Hi Grace, well done on being brave with all those insects around you. Which insect do you detest the most? I think my choice would be the cockroach

    Kerry R10

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